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-# she has sinned ... She has surrendered ... she has done
+# She has surrendered ... she has done
 
-These instances of "she" are addressed to the city of Babylon, but refer to the people who live in the city. Alternate translation: "her people have sinned ... Her people have surrendered ... her people have done" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Jeremiah speaks of the people who live in the city of Babylon as if they were the city itself, and he speaks of the city as if it were a woman. Alternate translation: "The people of Babylon have surrendered ... they have done" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+
+# her towers ... her walls
+
+Jeremiah speaks of the city of Babylon as if it were a woman. Alternate translation: "the towers of the city ... the walls of the city" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
 
 # her walls are torn down