From 42ad77a8a345d2303138f07e76ccd9f464422029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 3 Jul 2018 09:39:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] ULB updates --- 1ti/04/10.md | 4 ++-- 1ti/05/05.md | 14 +++++++------- 2co/01/10.md | 4 ---- 2co/01/14.md | 4 ++-- act/02/26.md | 2 +- act/16/19.md | 2 +- act/24/26.md | 2 +- act/26/06.md | 2 +- act/28/20.md | 2 +- col/01/05.md | 4 ++-- jas/03/06.md | 5 ++++- jhn/05/45.md | 8 ++++---- job/17/07.md | 4 ++-- php/01/20.md | 4 ++-- psa/002/008.md | 4 ++-- rom/05/04.md | 2 +- rom/05/05.md | 2 +- rom/15/04.md | 4 ++-- 18 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-) diff --git a/1ti/04/10.md b/1ti/04/10.md index 675e88efa1..07ed76583b 100644 --- a/1ti/04/10.md +++ b/1ti/04/10.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ The words "struggle" and "work very hard" mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize the intensity with which they serve God. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# we have hope in the living God +# the living God -Here "living God" probably means, "God, who makes all things live." +Possible meanings are 1) "the God who is alive," as opposed to idols, who are not alive, or 2) "God, who acts," as opposed to idols that do nothing, or 3) "God, who gives life to all living beings." # but especially of believers diff --git a/1ti/05/05.md b/1ti/05/05.md index 11b92dd556..71e4984073 100644 --- a/1ti/05/05.md +++ b/1ti/05/05.md @@ -1,16 +1,16 @@ -# But a real widow is left all alone +# But she who is a real widow, who is left all alone -"But one who is truly a widow has no family" +"But one who is truly a widow, who has no family" -# She always remains with requests and prayers +# continues in making petitions and offering prayers -"She continues to make requests and prayers" +"continues to make requests and prayers" -# requests and prayers +# making petitions and offering prayers -These two words mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize how much these widows pray. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) +These two phrases mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize how much these widows pray. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) -# both night and day +# night and day The words "night" and "day" are used together to mean "at all times." Alternate translation: "all the time" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-merism]]) diff --git a/2co/01/10.md b/2co/01/10.md index f9e5595699..96e5c3ed12 100644 --- a/2co/01/10.md +++ b/2co/01/10.md @@ -2,7 +2,3 @@ Paul compares his feeling of despair as a result of the troubles that they experienced to a deadly peril or terrible danger. Alternate translation: "despair" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# he will continue to deliver us - -"he will continue to rescue us" - diff --git a/2co/01/14.md b/2co/01/14.md index 5eb45c085a..6196a5ff48 100644 --- a/2co/01/14.md +++ b/2co/01/14.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# your reason for boasting +# you can boast -The word "boasting" here is used in the positive sense of feeling great satisfaction and joy in something. +The word "boast" here is used in the positive sense of feeling great satisfaction and joy in something. diff --git a/act/02/26.md b/act/02/26.md index f0c687ed4a..1d03495712 100644 --- a/act/02/26.md +++ b/act/02/26.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ People consider the "heart" the center of emotions and the "tongue" voices those emotions. Alternate translation: "I was glad and rejoiced" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) -# my flesh will live in certain hope +# my flesh will live in hope Possible meanings of the words "my flesh" are 1) they indicate that the writer is a mortal who will die. Alternate translation: "even though I am only mortal, I will have confidence in God" or 2) they are a synecdoche for the writer's entire person. Alternate translation: "I will live with confidence in God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) diff --git a/act/16/19.md b/act/16/19.md index 2cf8063806..5d92620d9b 100644 --- a/act/16/19.md +++ b/act/16/19.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ "the owners of the slave girl" -# When her masters saw that their opportunity to make money was now gone +# When her masters saw that their hope to make money was now gone It can be stated clearly why they no longer hoped to make money. Alternate translation: "When her masters saw that she could no longer earn money for them by telling fortunes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) diff --git a/act/24/26.md b/act/24/26.md index 23e511c1e4..14ae0a414e 100644 --- a/act/24/26.md +++ b/act/24/26.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Paul to give money to him +# Paul would give money to him Felix was hoping Paul would offer him a bribe to set him free. diff --git a/act/26/06.md b/act/26/06.md index cd96334137..1cbfda17ac 100644 --- a/act/26/06.md +++ b/act/26/06.md @@ -6,6 +6,6 @@ This word marks a shift from Paul discussing his past to talking about himself i This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "I am here, where they are putting me on trial" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# of my certain hope in the promise made by God to our fathers +# of my hope in the promise made by God to our fathers This speaks about a promise as if it were something a person could look for and see. Alternate translation: "I am waiting expectantly for God to do what he promised our forefathers he would do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/act/28/20.md b/act/28/20.md index c27afef64d..a1084d54d0 100644 --- a/act/28/20.md +++ b/act/28/20.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# the certain hope of Israel +# the hope of Israel Possible meanings are 1) the people of Israel confidently expect the Messiah to come or 2) the people of Israel confidently expect God to bring those who have died back to life. diff --git a/col/01/05.md b/col/01/05.md index 9f42fbf840..615f5fca5e 100644 --- a/col/01/05.md +++ b/col/01/05.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# because of the certain hope reserved for you in heaven +# because of the hope reserved for you in heaven -Here "certain hope" stands for what the believer can confidently expect, that is, the things that God has promised to do for all believers. These things are spoken of as if they were physical objects that God was keeping in heaven for the believers to possess later. Alternate translation: "because you are certain that God, who is in heaven, will do the many good things that he has promised you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +Here "hope" stands for what the believer can confidently expect, that is, the things that God has promised to do for all believers. These things are spoken of as if they were physical objects that God was keeping in heaven for the believers to possess later. Alternate translation: "because you are certain that God, who is in heaven, will do the many good things that he has promised you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # the word of truth, the gospel diff --git a/jas/03/06.md b/jas/03/06.md index 39a645e2c5..b369ec2e75 100644 --- a/jas/03/06.md +++ b/jas/03/06.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The tongue is a metonym for what people say. James calls it a fire because of the great damage it can do. Alternate translation: "The tongue is like a fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) -# a world of sinfulness set among our body parts +# a world of sinfulness set among the parts of our body The enormous effects of sinful speaking are spoken of as if they were a world by themselves. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) @@ -18,3 +18,6 @@ The phrase "course of life" refers to a person's entire life. Alternate translat The word "itself" refers to the tongue. Also, here "hell" refers to the powers of evil or to the devil. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "life because the devil uses it for evil" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +# Pending 1908 + +[1908](https://git.door43.org/WycliffeAssociates/en_ulb/issues/1908) \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/jhn/05/45.md b/jhn/05/45.md index 20068f8454..b0a586b660 100644 --- a/jhn/05/45.md +++ b/jhn/05/45.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ -# The one who accuses you is Moses, in whom you have put your hope +# The one who accuses you is Moses, in whom you have hoped -"Moses" here is a metonym here that stands for the law itself. Alternate translation: "Moses accuses you in the Law, the very Law in which you have put your hopes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +"Moses" here is a metonym here that stands for the law itself. Alternate translation: "Moses accuses you in the Law, the very Law in which you have hoped" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# your hope +# in whom you have hoped -"your confidence" or "your trust" +"in whom you have put your confidence" or "whom you expect to declare to God that you are righteous" diff --git a/job/17/07.md b/job/17/07.md index c484a4a560..34c469506b 100644 --- a/job/17/07.md +++ b/job/17/07.md @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ Job speaks of his vision as his "eyes." Alternate translation: "My vision has become weak because I am so sad" or "I am almost blind because of my sorrow" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# all my body parts are as thin as shadows +# all the parts of my body are as thin as shadows Shadows have no thickness and are infinitely thin. That is an exaggeration of how thin Job's body parts are. Alternate translation: "all my body parts are very thin" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]]) -# all my body parts +# all the parts of my body This is a generalization used to emphasize that his whole body is thin, but refers specifically to his arms and legs. Alternate translation: "my arms and legs" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]]) diff --git a/php/01/20.md b/php/01/20.md index 850b7ca33c..59c1bcb169 100644 --- a/php/01/20.md +++ b/php/01/20.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# It is my eager expectation and certain hope +# It is my eager expectation and hope -Here the word "expectation" and the phrase "certain hope" mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize how strong his expectation is. Alternate translation: "I eagerly and confidently hope" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) +Here the word "expectation" and the phrase "hope" mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize how strong his expectation is. Alternate translation: "I eagerly and confidently hope" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]]) # but that I will have complete boldness diff --git a/psa/002/008.md b/psa/002/008.md index 03c0bfa235..4d82c43393 100644 --- a/psa/002/008.md +++ b/psa/002/008.md @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ Yahweh continues speaking to the new king of Israel. -# the nations for your inheritance ... the farthermost regions of the earth for your possession +# the nations for your inheritance ... the ends of the earth for your possession These phrases express very similar ideas. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]]) -# the farthermost regions of the earth +# the ends of the earth "the lands that are very far away" diff --git a/rom/05/04.md b/rom/05/04.md index 5a9de5308e..9b5191c60f 100644 --- a/rom/05/04.md +++ b/rom/05/04.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# certain hope +# hope This is the certainty that God will fulfill all his promises for those who trust in Christ. diff --git a/rom/05/05.md b/rom/05/05.md index b12c86e9c9..23fd4db045 100644 --- a/rom/05/05.md +++ b/rom/05/05.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ These words refer to all believers and should be inclusive. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) -# that hope does not disappoint +# hope does not disappoint Paul uses personification here as he speaks of "hope" as if it were alive. Alternate translation: "we are very confident that we will receive the things that we wait for" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]]) diff --git a/rom/15/04.md b/rom/15/04.md index 09ccb44a99..2471a62e37 100644 --- a/rom/15/04.md +++ b/rom/15/04.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ You can translate this in an active form. Alternate translation: "For in times p Paul includes his readers and other believers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]]) -# in order that through patience and through encouragement of the scriptures we would have certain hope +# in order that through patience and through encouragement of the scriptures we would have hope -Here "have certain hope" means that the believers will know that God will fulfill his promises. You can make explicit the full meaning in your translation. Alternate translation: "In this way the scriptures will encourage us to expect that God will do for us everything that he has promised" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) +Here "have hope" means that the believers will know that God will fulfill his promises. You can make explicit the full meaning in your translation. Alternate translation: "In this way the scriptures will encourage us to expect that God will do for us everything that he has promised" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])