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 Abigail continues to reason with David.
 
-# my master ... my master ... my master ... your servant
+# my master
 
-Abigail speaks of herself and David as if they are two different people to show that she respects David. "you ... you ... you ... me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]])
+Abigail speaks of David as if he is another person, to show that she respects David. Alternate translation: "you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-pronouns]])