From 1a2186e2bbde0d5d6bf825032d00b2b522d5a735 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Susan Quigley Date: Mon, 28 Aug 2017 14:48:49 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Fixed note. tN Issue 330 --- mrk/02/22.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/mrk/02/22.md b/mrk/02/22.md index bf1b92cc78..2ef2226953 100644 --- a/mrk/02/22.md +++ b/mrk/02/22.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ # Connecting Statement: -Jesus begins to tell another parable about putting new wine in old wineskins as opposed to new wineskins. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]]) +Jesus begins to tell another parable. This one is about putting new wine into old wineskins rather than into new wineskins. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parables]]) # new wine -"grape juice." This refers to wine that has not fermented yet. If grapes are unknown in your area, use the general term for fruit. +"grape juice." This refers to wine that has not fermented yet. If grapes are unknown in your area, use the general term for fruit juice. # old wineskins @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This refers to wineskins that have been used many times. # wineskins -These were bags made out of animal skins. They could also be called "wine bags" or "skin bags" . +These were bags made out of animal skins. They could also be called "wine bags" or "skin bags." # the wine will burst the skins