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 # there is the daily pressure of my concern for all the churches
 
-Paul knows that God will hold him responsible for how well the churches obey God and speaks of that knowledge as if it were a heavy object pushing him down. Alternate translation: "I know that God will hold me accountable for the spiritual growth of all the churches, and so I always feel like a heavy object is pushing me down" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Here Paul's concern for the churches is spoken of as if it were a heavy object weighing him down.  Alternate translation: "I am so concerned everyday for all the churches that I feel like I have a heavy object weighing me down" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])